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"I'm sorry that you're such a bullshit excuse for a human," I mused as I tried to eat my food. The girl across from me looks at me like she's fuckin' Bambi or some shit. "You're bullshit baby, all nice and full of it. You suck at art, you suck at fucking and you suck at life." Amused I watch her cry and I don't really feel anything because I can't. What happened to me? Why am I like this? "You're disgusting," I tell her, "Go fucking clean yourself up." I roll my eyes and leave my half-empty plate. I swear to God I use to be a good person. Then again I don't believe in that bullshit either.
I don't even know anymore. Fuck off.
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TenderRevenge Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I really wanted to critique this but I didn't know enough to say. Is this true or a story? Are you just venting or did it just come as a story sort of? I like the aggression as well.
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HarukaMoon Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Student Writer
I think the agression adds to the feel of the writing.
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