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What are you about?
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It's about personality.
Are you sweet?
Kind?
Gentle?
or are you like me; full of hatred?
Angry?
Resentful?
Do you feel contempt?
I feel it.
It rattles my bones.
It keeps me breathing.
It keeps me from my first death, but not the second.
Are you sweet?
Kind?
Gentle?
or are you like me; full of hatred?
Angry?
Resentful?
Do you feel contempt?
I feel it.
It rattles my bones.
It keeps me breathing.
It keeps me from my first death, but not the second.
Inspired by dead-sweetheart.tumblr.com
The first death is when you die physically; the second death is when your name is said for the last time.
The first death is when you die physically; the second death is when your name is said for the last time.
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I like the repition in the words and the 4 lines per stanza. It keeps you at a steady, relaxed pace before the last line slaps you in the face (in a good way) and makes you want to read it again. I'd like to see more of Angel and find out more about why she feels this way.