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You think I'm Lonely
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You hide so well under my skin.
Twisting & Turning.
It's like you could almost be alive.
I like where you are, but how could you go so far?
My skull begins to crack as you begin to...
I'm sleeping only with myself tonight, wishing to just dry my eyes.
Where was I when you cried?
By your side.
Is there a big bend in your heart where I can just slide in and die?
Twisting & Turning.
Screaming & Burning.
It's like you could almost be alive.
I like where you are, but how could you go so far?
My skull begins to crack as you begin to...
I'm sleeping only with myself tonight, wishing to just dry my eyes.
Where was I when you cried?
By your side.
Is there a big bend in your heart where I can just slide in and die?
I think I've ggone mad
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The 1st stanza stands almost like a chorus line of a painful song... then the dramatic addiction of words keep the chorus alive until it dies.
I could never criticize your work or of another person, I just ware my feelings like you.
I could never criticize your work or of another person, I just ware my feelings like you.